
I heard there was a special place,
Where everything was green,
Covered in grass blanket,
Where animals were tall and lean.
The flowers there,
Used to bloom,
A lovely shade of blue,
The flowers there used to bloom,
A shining star upon their doom.
I heard there was a special place,
Squeezing in a snare,
Slowing becoming smaller,
The blue sky is now dark grey.
I heard there was a special place,
It’s blanket now a road,
The flowers now are buildings,
The whole place now a code,
I wish there was a special place.
A satire….Wowπ
Loved the end.
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Such powerful words ! Plz keep putting your thoughts on paper ! It reminds us and shows us the mirror . ππ
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Thank you Priya! Yash has had the opportunity to visit Xavier’s and meet many of our profs. Today he got a run down of my classmates. Much appreciate your encourage.
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Loved it! Especially the ending. Keep posting. πππ
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Thanks
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Thanks you. From Yash
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Lovely Yash!
I can see you love for nature and animals. This has come from your heart.
Strong work on on rhyming words. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you for the comment. From Yash
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Thank you Alma. This summer post the vaccines, we need to get together.
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Wow!!! Very well written Yash!
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Thank you for the thoughtful comment
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Thank you Bhavini!
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love this Yash. You bring me into your writings
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Thank you very much! From Yash
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Thank you Ms. Tomek. Yash is still getting a hang of WordPress and itβs functionality. He tried to respond to all comments not sure if were displayed properly.
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Superb work yash….keep up the great work.
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Very thoughtful! From Yash
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Thank you!!
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Thank you Minal tai. Have a good day at school.
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Well done Yash, you impress me daily!
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Thank you Mr. Gerwig. Yash is still getting a hang of WordPress and itβs functionality. He tried to respond to all comments not sure if they were displayed properly.
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Great stuff, Yash! Keep pursuing this passion and love for writing. Very impressive!
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Thank you!!
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Thank you
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Thank you Mr. Clifford. Yash is still getting a hang of WordPress and itβs functionality. He tried to respond to all comments not sure if they were displayed properly.
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Hi Yash, this is a wonderful build up of imagery.
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Thank you. From Yash
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Nice poem Yash. Very well written. Keep the flow on. Inspiring poetry indeed.
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Thanks you! From Yash
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Eloquently penned, Yash. The abundance of talent is amply evident.
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Thank you Amit. Appreciate you taking time and encouraging Yash.
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